My Gardens Last Hurrah !

It’s autumn, can the first frost be far ahead ?  When it comes, it will destroy any tender annual and persuade perennial flowers to freeze and die.  The plant will take shelter in the ground and hopefully weather the winter to rise up again in spring.  Until then, there will be snow and cold and freezing and thawing, just another winter in Chicago.

So, I wanted to share with you some highlights of this years flowering plants.

  1.  Hummingbird Mint
  2.  Cleome with remnants of Cardinal Flower
  3.  White Turtle’s Head
  4.  Wisteria bushes in bloom




How to Hook a Literary Agent to Represent Writing and Get Published

By: Robert Lee Brewer

The first step in hooking a literary agent appropriate for your writing project is to be able to define what your writing project is. Some writers may find this easy to do; others may struggle. Regardless, it’s an important task to complete if you wish to publish your book.

Category exercise: Go to a few local bookstores and determine where you think your book should be shelved in the store. And no, you’re not allowed to put it on an endcap or front-of-store display.

Would your book go in a fiction section? Nonfiction section? A category within fiction or nonfiction? There’s a difference between general adult fiction and young adult or science fiction—just as there is a difference between general reference and self-help or inspiration. Nail down where your work belongs in multiple bookstores.

This task will help you find appropriate literary agents who represent your category. But it will also help you pitch appropriate literary agents.

The Query Letter

The query letter is the ultimate sales tool for writers. When done effectively, queries help writers gain the representation of literary agents and editors. And when knocked out of the park, queries can even end up being the copy on the back of the book itself.

All effective queries have three basic components: a pitch (or hook), more information on the project, and a concise about the author sentence (or brief paragraph).

(Click here to learn how to write successful queries for any writing genre.)

The pitch is usually handled in the first line or paragraph of the query, and it’s meant to spark interest in the project. This is followed by a paragraph or three of more information about the project that sustains that interest from the pitch by providing more of the story or supporting evidence of need. Finally, the about the author information is there to show why you’re the perfect person to write this book.

Query letters are important, but their main goal is not to seal the deal (even in the case of back cover copy). Rather, queries are meant to inspire more interest in the project so that an agent or editor will request the manuscript, synopsis, book proposal, and/or sample chapters. By the way, in the case of readers with back cover copy, the goal is to get them to read the first page.

The Synopsis

The synopsis is a straightforward document that summarizes the book. As such, it includes the beginning, middle, and end of the book. Don’t worry about sharing spoilers with your potential agent or editor, because you’ll be going over the manuscript together several times during the publication process.

The main variable for synopses is the length that is requested by an agent or editor. The most common length is one page, but some go a little longer. Others may request a much longer synopsis, which is why it’s always best to follow specific submission guidelines.

That said, here are some great pieces on writing the synopsis:

Get feedback on your synopsis!

Before sending your synopsis to an agent or editor, run it through our 2nd Draft critique service. A synopsis critique from 2nd Draft Writing Critique Service provides you with specific, tailored advice for your 2-page synopsis.

Specifically, it offers an overall evaluation of the synopsis’ strengths and weaknesses, specific comments on the appropriateness to your proposed target audience, a non-biased assessment of the effectiveness of your synopsis, and a clear idea of how to revise.

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The Book Proposal

The synopsis is generally used as a submission tool for novelists, though they can be requested for memoirs and narrative nonfiction projects too. Most nonfiction submissions require a book proposal that identifies the key selling points of the proposed book, including evidence of need, unique selling point, competitive and comparable titles, marketing ideas, and more.

Here are the basic components of a book proposal:

  • Overview. This is a compelling top-level summary of what the book is about and why it’s needed in the marketplace. In fact, it’s a lot like the pitch or hook in your query letter or the back cover copy on a published book. The intent is to make your book idea easy to understand while driving decision makers to want to know more about the project.
  • Target audience. Many great book ideas have been rejected over the years for one simple reason: The author (and/or agent or editor) could not sufficiently connect an appropriate target audience to that convinced publishers the book would sell a lot of copies. In this section, authors really need to quantify (with real numbers) who their target audience is.
  • Marketing plan. In this section, authors need to share how they have already reached out to their target audience, whether that’s through a blog or website, speaking appearances, articles in online and print publications, YouTube channel, or whatever. As with the target audience section, quantifiable numbers tied to past performance are key to making this section strong.
  • Comp titles. Comp titles is short for competitive or comparable titles. In other words, this section shares already existing books that are closely related to yours and (hopefully) performing well. This helps add weight to your evidence of need for your target audience, and it gives you an opportunity to show your book’s USP (or unique selling point) by explaining why your book is better (or different) than what’s currently on the market.
  • About the author. This is where you show why you’re the perfect person to write this book by sharing your relevant expertise on the subject or already established platform. (Click here for advice on how to build your author platform and stay sane.)
  • Chapter outline. This section acts like the synopsis in that it summarizes the book’s contents on a chapter-by-chapter level. A strong chapter outline will show an agent or editor that you don’t only have an inspired idea but a well-formed idea that will fill the pages needed for a book-length project. Plus, this is a great place to show off your voice and treatment of the subject matter.
  • Sample chapters. Nonfiction book proposals were often sold on ideas alone, but more and more publishers expect a sample chapter or three to get a sense of the author’s voice and treatment of the subject.

The Sample Pages (or Full Manuscript)

If the query letter is what gets a novelist’s foot in the door, the full manuscript is what can close the sale or kill it. Sometimes agents request sample pages or sample chapters before requesting the full manuscript. If they do, send the requested material in the appropriate format (ask or look at their submission guidelines) starting at page one.

When they request the full manuscript, send it in the appropriate format as well. But don’t sit around twiddling your thumbs or fretting over whether it’s going to be accepted or rejected, because it may take the agent a while to give it his or her full attention. They do have actual clients, after all.

Take a day off, sure, but then, get back at it. Get back to writing. Because that’s what writers do.



Amazon says these are the 25 toys every kid will want this holiday season

Have you visited your favorite store yet ?  I’m here to prepare you for a shocker.  I have been in 2 stores this week and both have sort of bypassed Halloween and Thanksgiving, 2 huge celebrations in the U.S., and zoomed directly into Christmas.  Trees and lights and ornaments everywhere.  Hey, it’s only September folks.  Will the stores begin playing, “White Christmas” on their speakers next week ?  Maybe not, but they have begun stocking the shelves with toys, toys and more toys.

Amazon must butt into this holiday also by suggesting what toys will be hot and what will be not.  As a public service to parents and grandparents, I have listed some of the toys that will be “HOT”.  If you care to see all 25, I will provide a link to the Amazon article.  Of course, I don’t receive dime one from Amazon for this post.  I’m just priming you for what your kids wants and hints you will hear in the next 3 months.  Good luck parents, and for goodness sakes be very, very careful in your selection !

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    released its holiday wish list on September 5,
    featuring the top 100 toys kids will likely want this holiday

  It further broke it down to a list of the 25 must-have toys.

  The list includes best-selling toys and games that are
  expected to be popular as gift-giving season rolls around.

  Characters from Marvel, Star Wars, and Harry Potter are
  prominently featured on the list. Some toys are exclusive to

    Business Insider's homepage for more


  It might only be September, but the holiday season is upon us.

  Luckily, Amazon is prepared.

  The e-commerce giant just revealed its Holiday Toy List, a
  showcase of the 100 best-selling toys that parents should keep
  their eyes when it comes time to buying gifts, from Lego sets to
  bicycles. Some toys are exclusive to Amazon and some have not yet
  been released for sale. 

    Read more:
    Walmart says these will be the 48
  toys every kid wants this holiday season

  "We are excited to reveal the top picks of our Amazon 2019
  Holiday Toy List, our best list yet," Anne Carrihill, category
  leader of Toys & Games for Amazon, said in a statement posted on the
  retailer's website. "Our Top 100 toys and games has been
  carefully curated by a team of experts to highlight the newest,
  best-selling and most-talked-about toys. This year's list
  features more Amazon exclusive toys and games than ever before."

  Here are the top 25 toys that Amazon says kids will likely want
  the most:

  • The list includes best-selling toys and games that are expected to be popular as gift-giving season rolls around.
  • Characters from Marvel, Star Wars, and Harry Potter are prominently featured on the list. Some toys are exclusive to Amazon.
  • Here are the top 25 toys that Amazon says kids will likely want the most:

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